peepers

Tinnitus of frogs
the size of thimbles crying
let’s begin again

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This really does seem like good exercise. The constraint feels like a gift, though I realize the constraint of syllables per line is about the only one I’m observing.  I was a little concerned about the pronunciation of tinnitus here. There are two pronunciations, and I’ve decided they both work, though they create much different rhythms.

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  1. I love this one! “Beginner’s mind.”

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