cold spell

were you to find her
dead in the snow
it could be
forever zero

5 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by sofieonecrow on January 28, 2014 at 10:51 pm

    Sometimes, the heart doesn’t break…sometimes, it freezes to death.

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  2. Clever from a semantic point of view; gruesome in that I am unable to rid myself of the conviction that you have someone specific in mind.

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  3. The Crow: is that an original?
    RR (Toney?… R. Toney, your rapper name?) The seed was in a sad, and I suppose gruesome thought, yes. Dangerous weather to be alone in here. Incapacitation would mean death in short order.

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    • Posted by sofieonecrow on January 29, 2014 at 12:42 pm

      Yes. It is my interpretation of what you wrote – my first thought in response to reading it, anyway. Perhaps it is too revealing. Perhaps I should have put it on the mantelpiece for a day or two?

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